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A good cold email to a B2B decision-maker is short, specific and useful. It is not a brochure and it is not a trick. The goal of the first message is only to start a conversation with someone who has a reason to care.

Start with the right person

Even a perfect email fails if it reaches the wrong role or a dead address. Define who you want to reach using your ideal customer profile, and make sure the contact details have been checked before you send.

The five parts of a good cold email

1. A clear, honest subject line

Say what the email is about in plain words. Short, specific subjects usually work better than clever ones. Avoid anything that pretends to be a reply or a forwarded message.

2. A relevant opening

Show in one line why you are writing to them. Mention something real, such as their market, a recent launch or a challenge common in their industry. Generic flattery is easy to spot.

3. One clear idea

Explain, in a sentence or two, the problem you help with and what changes for companies like theirs. Keep the focus on their situation, not on your company history.

4. Proof, if you have it

A brief, truthful example helps. Only use results you can back up.

5. A small, easy next step

Ask for something low-pressure, such as a short call or whether it would be useful to share more. One request is better than three.

A simple structure

  1. Subject: what this is about, in a few words.
  2. Line one: why you are contacting them.
  3. Lines two and three: the problem and how you help.
  4. Last line: one easy question.
  5. Signature with your name, company and a way to opt out.

Follow-ups

Most replies come after a follow-up, not the first message. Space them out, add something new each time (a useful link, a short example, a different angle) and stop after a few. Polite persistence is fine; repeating the same message is not.

Respect the recipient

  • Write to business contacts about their professional role only.
  • Include a clear way to opt out, and honour it promptly.
  • Follow the rules that apply in the countries you contact, and take advice where you need it.

What to measure

  • Bounce rate (a signal of data quality).
  • Reply rate and the type of replies.
  • Meetings booked.
  • Which roles, industries and messages work best.

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